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The water called to the liquid in her eyes
And the tears did then begin to rise
Within this space of hollow sound
And unmistakable call of moisture seeking ground
a drip
a drip
Echoing within the walls of all they sought to quell
As he said "why" and cried to break this spell
She drew within herself and trembling paled
And surely eons came and went before her breath exhaled
"I cannot"
A droop of head and she said "You know that it will rain"
For the world itself grew cold and wept at her enduring pain
And all that fell beneath their aching hearts
Twas love for her he dared to then impart
With a gentle touch he peered into her soul
"I know."
"My dear, I know."

And then the receding water slowly swirled away
As she sighed and let a final tear sweep softly down her face.



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On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
Breathtaking. Oh, to find that someone that really understands without words being said. A like minded soul.


On Sunday September 7th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
heh...breathtaking Cre!+Fallen One+


On Thursday June 12th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
This stirs up the emotions something fierce. I do miss having a gentle voice to sooth my pain, in the way only a girlfriend can... :)


On Thursday June 12th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:
What can I say that hasn't been said. Wow...


On Monday June 9th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
This defines innovative. I thought that it was impossible, at this point, to write anything relating to the age old tears/rain metaphor and not have be completely cliché. I stand corrected, very corrected. Amazing.


On Monday June 9th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:
This is simply amazing.


On Monday June 9th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
how the hell did i miss this piece .. i love this, amazing write.[D&A]


On Sunday June 8th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
only a beautiful soul can write such a beautiful poem... You stole my hear with this poem! :)


On Saturday June 7th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:
i love it jane, extremely powerful. , undeniably wonderful


On Saturday June 7th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:
Cre!!!!! This was simply an amazing piece of work. Raw, powerful, overwhelming. ~ mw


On Saturday June 7th, 2003, GothicBlack (268) writes:
wow cre, I’m left breathless.. speechless... what can be said to such a beautiful, powerful write. how sad... its overpowering... its despair in its pure form, and sadness in its rawest. wow... ~gothic~



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