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mood: alone

music in the background

dreams run down my face

dying and I'm breaking

this is not the place

not the place I thought it was

now I sigh alone

in the arms of no one

and I don't know

I just don't know

there should be more

but the dark will overwhelm me

and I will slide to the floor

and cradle my own head

in the arms of no one

in tears alone

and I don't know

I just don't know anymore

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On Saturday May 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

aloniness is all i want and choose to feel... nice poetry

On Sunday June 1st, 2003, CharlottesWeb (621) writes:

The utter loneliness and awkward lost feeling that accompanies it, gleamed through like a dull heart beat in a mass grave. I could have fallen right into this and off my chair. ~DW~

On Saturday May 17th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:

You successfully captured the feeling of hopelessness we all feel at times...when the reality sets in that, despite the facade, we are truely alone. Ciao, T/S

On Sunday May 11th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

Beautiful, i enjoyed this much!

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:

A wonderful piece which allows me to get in touch with how I feel now as well. So dark and so brilliant! Great piece, you!

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:

you describe the feeling of being alone so well in this poem, it was so dark and sad and wonderful to read, thanks for sharing

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

I felt the push of the dark around me, it's like you took the loneliness and bottled it, then dropped it on the floor and let it back into the world.

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

breaking, like the sound of glass, shattered and muffled...

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, Armand (70) writes:

"dreams run down my face" - oh man... i LOVE this line... it says it all so eloquently succinctly. if you werent so popular, i might be inclined to steal it. great piece.

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Six-Out (1798) writes:

Wow, jane, just wow. It left me with a feeling of helplessness knowing that one of my good friends is in this situation. I hope it gets better.

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

rocking and tragic and it's like I felt the racking sobs you didn't even disclose with words. Tired, and I just don't know anymore.

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

ahh ... this is more like it .. lets go stab eachother with dull forks .... nice write cre,

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

No one knows...A nice dark moody piece which takes me to this dark place.Good piece.-Kefka

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