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Puzzle Pieces

a splash of color here
russet spatterings
earth brown swirls
landscaping

jagged edges
peaks and valleys
undulating
in and out

puzzling how
piece by piece
the picture takes shape
fitting together

creams and golds
join

flashes of blue-green
aquamarine
forest

liquid and dark

black crescents
form moons
rosy mounds
begin the glow of sunrise

a final locking
of two remaining pieces

in the center

filling the one hole
making the picture
this picture
our picture
our life

Complete.

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On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

this brightened my day a bit. again, you are an excellant writer

On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

beautifully written,the images as each verse was like another pice of the jigsaw in my mind,leaving a whole of brilliance,beautifully expressed

On Thursday July 29th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Reminds me of a story i read today by brothers grimm, two pieces of a ring put back together symbolic of two lovers coming together...Buzzy feeling ;)

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (32) writes:

ooh i like this. Uplifting. nice work! ~ Psychotic

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