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Rain Dancing

Spinning in slow
circles
hair plastered to
face
rain streaming down
cheeks
a semblance of
tears
clinging to glittering
eyeslashes
wind singing sweet
melodies
upon her seashell
ear
her water music
tonight.
Clothes clinging to
body
enhancing full breasts
unbound
skirt flairing delicately
outward
slapping against body
slickened.
Bare feet splash
dancing
within the puddles
formed
raising up on
tiptoes
to kiss full
moon
and gaze ever
upward
toward crying skies
home

as she dances
on.

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On Monday April 26th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (372) writes:

*shakes head* I can't believe how amazing this trully is, my children will be reading your work in school...I would take up a whole page writing what is so great about this poem...+T.P.U+

On Monday April 26th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (372) writes:

Seriously...+T.P.U+

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

i love love love this! there's just so much here.. and not a word of it need be spoken, but just absorbed. so amazing. i think this is my fav of all yours ive read.

On Friday April 16th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:

Memories flash and dance within themselves, broken visions of a once joyous occasion, dancing in the rain for no reason. But for the rain itself, free abandon, love for nothing bu the love of love itself...

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Zophiel (419) writes:

I just say that I agree with all the commentors

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

I could see this girl as if I were staring at her through my window. An absolutely gorgeous write, so wistful and dream-like. ~L

On Monday April 12th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

this is a beautiful piece, lots of imagrey, i loved it.~~~Grave

On Monday April 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Well, i havn't read many of your works as of yet, but i will now. Heh, good job, its nice and simple.

On Monday April 12th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

ohhhhhhhhhhh lovely... lovely... sad and romantic...wonderful imagery as always. I hope I dream about this tonight... Fox

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Evil (491) writes:

dancing in the rain. *takes off clothes and runs outside* =( it doesnt rain here...only snow..

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

ambrosia... this is magical.. astoundingly beautiful.. tear wellingly vivid.. a moving, living scene. i always loved your "twirling" descriptions, but i think if i saw you in this scene, i would have to marry you. ill never stop reading this.

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

I can relate totaly.. I would love to get money writing stuff like this, just sitting behind a desk.. :O) you know I adore your talent... Monkey *hugs

On Monday April 12th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

i have a total weakness for 'dance' pieces... this is lovely... "clinging to glittering eyeslashes" is extra-fab, too. beautiful write. :)

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