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red
ripe
juicy

dewy with honey
sweetness

bare limbs
waving in the breeze
beckoning

desire
Snakes
over her
tantalizing
pulling her deeper
claiming her
imparting the Knowledge
she desperately seeks
eyes wide in wonder
as she reaches
higher
grasping for the
Forbidden Fruit

pulling
down
hard

releasing with satisfying
snap

caressing the
smooth firmness, eager
to take her first taste

lips
part
trembling with
anxiousness
tongue flicking
out as
teeth graze
entering
juices flowing
tasting sweet
sensations
never known
before

tangling
blowing
wild

wind whipping into a
frenzy

fierce, biting
taking hold of her
body and soul

coursing
rippling
penetrating
to the core
commanding attention
refusing to be ignored
breathless as it
washes over her
taking her innocense
replaced with Truth
lies
she opens her eyes
and gazes at a new world.



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On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Ophelia (305) writes:
truely beautiful, the sexual undertones it all kind of makes me smile.............O


On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Juggalotus (73) writes:
The forbidden fruit brings new meaning to peoples lives. Such is the case with many narcotics, mescalin, acid, etc: Modern day forbidden fruit. See life in new ways and appreciate all existence. Great poem.


On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:
*shivers* this was just enchanting... fabulous format Sweets. great stuff. Fox


On Monday March 15th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (372) writes:
Hey I commented on all three of these seperately...Well this is what they said. Remarkable flow, everything dissolves so well into the next line/stanza, the story vividly re-created.


On Monday March 15th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (372) writes:
An amazing specimen of the reason why you are on my favourites list. +T.P.U+


On Monday March 15th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:
ahh i can feel every step with feminine tenderness, delicacy, "pulling down hard releasing with satisfying snap". this is unique, and so very refreshing, deliacte all the way, something rather undefinable here. nice piece ambrosia.



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