DarkPoetry -|- sweetambrosia -|- All the Colours Red

All the Colours Red

Red

Red as a bleeding heart's
last dying breath
gasping, pleading
for release.

Red as your hair
in the rays of the sunset
russet locks falling sofly
covering your face.

Red as my love
burning for you
through veins screaming
seething in rage.

Red as my passion
need to save
and regret
singeing the past.

Red as my pain
crying tears
of my broken heart
shattered.

Redhot...
bloodred...
valentine...
baby mine.

seeing stars
seeing red
seeing you

beautiful you

gazing back at me
through the haze
of clouds drifting
off to brilliant

blue.

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on All the Colours Red

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:

ahh blue.. at least it was mentioned.. lol.. nice write but sometimes red drives me mad... ~blue~

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

ahhh lovely, always a joy to read. every single stanza holds vivid visions, deep feelings, some kind of feeling of burning hot blood in the sun. warmth somehow felt, until slowly drained out to blue.

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:

I have to make a comment, i'll try make it good with care! 6th stanza was very lyrical and worked well, especially the transition to blue at the end, it works well in contrast to red repetition...was that a good comment?

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

Beautiful and graceful. A really sweet piece. ~L

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Cinn (187) writes:

this was a lovely peice i liked how it began with red and ended with blue - very nice touch

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

I have seen a few poems about this, but it's safe to say that this topped them all! Thanks sweets, it was amazing! And the ending... Brilliant! ~Wish Upon A Star

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:

That was beautiful. Truly. It was something I would write so from one poet to another - cheers.

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/3812/31424 on Tuesday December 02nd, 2008 08:47 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)