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A Moment

He comes up
behind me
wrapping his arms
around me tightly
dipping his head to kiss my neck
and rest lightly there
I could stay in
this moment forever
freeze frame it and lock it away
oh, to be able to pull this up and
experience it like an old movie
time and again
I am home
in these arms
and safe
to be able to capture
this moment in time
and keep it always.

He breaths in my scent
slightly ruffling my hair
pressing his body closer to mine
he fits so perfectly there
right there behind me
and then he shifts
oh so slightly
and for a moment
I fear that he is moving
to leave me standing there
bereft of his warmth
but no... he has only moved
to line himself more securely
and now he fits
more surely
than he had before.

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On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

A moment like this is very powerful when you have nothing to hold. :::OLd

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

wow this is beautiful.a flawless moment captured with your well chosen words. i respect your ability to draw a picture such as this without being dirty about it. lol. awesome write.

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:

hahahaha i fear i am becoming far too cynical to read sweet poetry ambrosia...I loved the doubt when he shifted, par excellence *applauds*

On Friday February 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

This is very nice, I think I have found that same special feeling.

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, nell (327) writes:

you capture this moment really well, if only we could take it and lock it up in a bottle

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:

This piece captures your security with your man...I wish my g/f would write something like this for me...Mike

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Choronzon (226) writes:

This is really nice. You're a lucky lady.

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, sweetambrosia (103) writes:

Truly... I am. --sweets

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