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Blood pounding drums upon ears ringing
breath quaking out of lungs searing
hands shaking and eyes straining, tearing
all rushing to meet a conclusion.

Candlelight flickering casting shadows on walls
burning skin glowing firelight hues while darkness falls
sweat pouring, beading, pooling, as climax calls
finally finding release.

Ink flowing, painting pictures with words
flowing out, melting together, blurred
feverish, spilling, unable to be deterred
panting as it comes.

Cotton candy skies and incandescent lies
Eyes wide in surprise and trembling thighs
reaching for the prize and finally breath slowly dies
down as it all finds form.

Chest heaving, now spent and relaxing
body numbed as dawn starts casting
rays upon the bed and all the lasting
images he has created

Upon her body still glistening, shining
with ink and sweat, he looks on sighing
admiring his work as she is lying
peacefully dreaming after a night fulfilled.






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On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
beautifully captivating. a powerful mesh of verbs churning and mixing into this big ball of emotion and fulfillment.


On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
Truly breathtaking... In a wierd way, you made me feel more like a whole person. Peter


On Friday February 6th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (372) writes:
Yeah, I like this one very much. I liked your use of incandescent lies. I used that in a poem if I can find it somewhere. The pictures you painted with these were lovely. +T.P.U+


On Friday February 6th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (372) writes:
with these words*


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:
Wow this was such a mixture of imagery and theme that i got lost as to where you were taking me...A mixture of subtle eroticism and art...What art is all about really :)


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
"burning skin glowing firelight hues while darkness falls" Mmm very intense. Beautiful style. Love it. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
Wow...I like it!!! ^_^!!


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:
this was truly amazing. *picks jaw off of floor* the flow, the structure..i love this....ben.


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Drea (920) writes:
i logged in just to comment on this. i have to agree with soul. this is breathtaking. this is a great write. very well done. ~Drea~


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:
Now that sweetheart... is breathtaking.. seems like a perfect compliment. I love it. :::OLd



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