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"Heartfelt Promises" by sweetambrosia

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Broken promises
made new...
forgotten...
made again...
shattering
the dreams
of a child
depending on
your word.
Forgetting you
lied...
trusting...
again...
yet
little by little
that trust ebbs
away...
forgetting.
Growing up
disbelieving,
hurt and lied
to...
don’t
say it anymore!
I can’t stand
losing hope
all because of
broken dreams
and lying words
and...
all your

broken

heartfelt

promises.




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On Monday January 26th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
this struck me deeply.. damn good poetry.. *bows before talent* Monkey


On Monday January 26th, 2004, manicheism (51) writes:
it felt like a shot of resentment. good work.


On Monday January 26th, 2004, sweetambrosia (103) writes:
actually yeah, quite a bit of resentment. I wrote this several years ago, but I still don't like people to make promises and I refuse to make them unless I can keep them.


On Monday January 26th, 2004, Methos (154) writes:
Your style is magnificent and this poem reflects your emotions...A great write, and beautifully put. -Methos


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
ahh i HATE when people break promises.. great write..


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
Beautiful-ness... I never make promises, because I know that I'll break them... ~Wish Upon A Star


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (33) writes:
Intense. Only word I can use to describe this experience. Indeed, I've been there myself. It gets better. -Doll


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, no_independence (19) writes:
*tear,tear* beautiful! And totally relatable! ~no_independence



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