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Dreamcatcher

Feathers hanging down
from a spider web
woven intricately to
capture invading insects,
allowing cool breezes and
moonbeam dreams to filter
through.
Standing ever watchful
guard over innocence
slumbering.
Dawn erupts, dispelling all
shadows.

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On Monday February 16th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

between these words i feel the love of a parent, a simple gesture, sweet, a symbol of ever-loving protection. "...cool breezes and moonbeam dreams..." magical words.

On Friday January 16th, 2004, Juggalotus (73) writes:

I do not see a new beginning as much as I wonder... Can you, like a spider, drain the energy of what gets caught and use it to your advantage?

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:

this spider seems to be on guard , not allowing the bad stuff to pass ... thus the dreams , and the breeze flow through --- he is there for the benefit of the innocents

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:

this stuff is great - funguy

On Friday January 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (17) writes:

I agree, a new beginning indeed good write ~LEAH

On Friday January 16th, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:

A new beginning is what I got from this...But unfortunately darkness falls again...but very good, and the imagery is perfect...-Mike

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