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"Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll

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This broken little heart
This broken little girl
This broken little home
That's taken away her world
Nobody cares for "tainted"
Nobody cares for "lost"
Nobody cares for "different"
Because it's just not worth the cost.
And sweet little lullabies
No longer play as she sleeps
Instead, the echoing of threats
As into the night, she weeps.
And everyday just another
Reason for her to scream
But who in there right mind
Would help such a broken thing?


© 2006 TornPaperDoll

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On Monday February 13th, 2006, An Expired Member (11) writes:
I could kind off relate this to me....nice write...


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, BlackBear (16) writes:
A broken human being always has someone to catch the pieces, be they friend, or stranger. Look inside to find the question, and ask for help to find the hidden things. Well written. - Michael


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (5) writes:
"Tainted…Ruined…no, not true! These words resemble many others, They do NOT resemble you."


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, Crimson Shade (115) writes:
I "Would help such a broken thing" - nobody is broken - we are different. Amazing write full of emotion and heart... so innocent in its reflection... great write.


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, urbanhumility (1345) writes:
you wear your heart on your sleeve.......you have reached me with this honest and innocent quandry...............well done.................urban


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
you aren't broken, its the disease telling you that...you're beautiful inside, sensitive and you don't deserve your pain. i wish i knew how to tell you to make it go away. keep writing it, it helps me a little...


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
*cries* were i an angel, i'd hold you tight and safe in my wings tonight, until you cried yourself to sleep, because thats what i want an angel to do for me... hang in there, i know it hurts. ~pf~


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
so sad, and so true in life. It sucks that the things and the people that we care most for in life can make us feel this way. awesome job as always amanda, keep it up, I love it when you post new works ~Josh~


On Sunday February 12th, 2006, Anybody_Killette (50) writes:
Wow, this hits me hard.. It's so,, familiar..



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