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I wish you could see my beauty
As little as there seems to be
And I wish that for a moment
You could see inside of me
You could look at my heart
All blackened and bruised
Empty and drained now
From always getting used
Then maybe you’d understand
Why this is all so tough
For me to share with you
Even after you’ve shared so much
If only I knew you wouldn’t flinch
At the scars that cover my body
Then maybe you might know why
Letting you get near is too hard for me
I wish you could’ve see my eyes
About ten years ago
Before they shined with hate
Defeat, depression and woe
Maybe if you saw the stains
Of the bloodshed in my mind
Then you would comprehend
And I wouldn’t have to lie
So, here is your heart back
I shouldn't have taken it before
I've nothing to offer you
Because someone left my heart, bleeding on the floor.




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On Thursday November 4th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:
wonderful portrayal of raw heartbroken emotion. very painful to read! ~sex~


On Monday July 19th, 2004, Dommi (132) writes:
oooh.. a new favorite indeed. bravo! <3Dommi


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
Great imagery, I enjoy reading all of your works.


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:
reading this for a second time i realized some thing profound...this really is like reading about myself....from the scars to the eys ten years ago...all of it...


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:
i think it hit so close to home that i blocked it...cause reading this hurt me this time and then i read my comment and couldnt believe how i sugar coated it... wow


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
Simply amazing, I feel you on this !00%, fantastic write, such talent good job ~Emptyness~


On Monday February 16th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:
truly....wonderful...sad painful and heart wrenching....but thats what its all about sometimes....ive been there....it sucks....


On Thursday February 12th, 2004, LovedByAMiracle (54) writes:
you are an amazing poet. no matter what you're writing your words just flow and you always keep me coming back for more.


On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (343) writes:
i can connect with this on so many levels....-l-


On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Anybody_Killette (50) writes:
*Sigh*.. I love your poetry.. this write.. is so.. good.. it's like.. my own thoughts.. from someone elses mouth


On Friday February 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
you have a wonderfull knack for flow, but more important you've found a voice and it is wonderful.



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