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Didn’t you see those marks lying on my arm
That show how much I love to cause myself some harm
Did you even take a glance at the stitches on my wrist
Or is that just something you prefer would not exist?
Didn’t you take note of how I curse when I speak
Those aren’t words that a little girl should think
Wasn’t it kind of funny; I can’t look anyone in the eye
Or maybe you didn’t notice, because you didn’t try.
Isn’t it disturbing how Pain is my best friend
Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again
I thought I made this all, an obvious cry for help
But if you won’t relieve me, then I’ll relieve myself…




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On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Starfilled Starburst Starless (15) writes:
"Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again" this was so sad but there is so much intense emotion behind it i could really feel what you wrote. nice. -star


On Friday March 12th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
brutally sad, i agree with tim as well, very intense, great write ~Emptyness~


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
We all have scars either visual or internal, you expressed it so well. I especially liked "Isn’t it disturbing how Pain is my best friend Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again" So well said.


On Thursday January 29th, 2004, Anybody_Killette (50) writes:
.. Wow.. it kinda describes me.. *sigh* Strange.. Good Write


On Thursday January 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
god damn...fucking intense...we scream for help and get nothing...and people wonder why others commit suicide...sometimes it seems like the only choice.nice!-tim


On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
aww thats so sad.. this is exactly how i felt a couple years ago for awhile about my mom.... nice write



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