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Take off that mold
That plaster on your face
Show me every flaw,
Show me truth and disgrace
I can barely see your eyes
And all that they must hold
The weight they carry
The warm, along with the cold.
Your lips are far too firm
For me to touch with mine
But I think that I would rather
Feel the realness that’s behind.
You don’t have to play pretend with me
I won’t be afraid if you show me your scars
Because someone once told me
Even darkness has its stars
So, you can make yourself defenseless
You no longer have to hide
I promise that I’ll still love
Whomever you’ve hidden inside
Read me all the hurtful things
That you have written time after time
And maybe when you show me yours
I will show you mine.




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On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
BoldSolitude is exactly right, your talent is endless, great job ~Emptyness~


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
You have definately been placed on my favorites list. Your talent seems endless.


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
wowwww i love it!!! "Even darkness has its stars".. i wish i'd thought of that line lol... ahh i want to know someone like that.... love the last two lines too... GREAT job


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
*loved it* Too many people hide away their true self.. And you described it perfectly. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
beautiful!!!!! completely BEAUTIFUL!!!! i loved the line even darkness has its stars.... omg i loved it great job keep up the great work it had a wonderful meaning to it!!!!


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Anybody_Killette (50) writes:
Heh.. :) you referred to my poem.. that made me happy.. This is such a good poem.. I love it..



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