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Somebody Break Her

Break her please,
Tear her apart,
Crush that sad,
Aching heart.
Take that film,
Off her eyes,
Stuff her mouth,
With tasty lies.
Then let her scream,
As loud as she can.
Raise up an army,
Strike up the band.
Peel off the band-aids,
That cover the pain.
Leave her outside,
In the pouring rain.
Take the stitches
From her mouth,
I’m asking you nicely;
She wants to get out.
Somebody break her,
Somebody please.
There’s a little girl dying,
Inside of me.

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On Friday April 7th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

haunting beyond diction; quite a spellbinding write.

On Wednesday March 29th, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

sad and beautiful

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:

haunting and pleasing -kitty

On Friday December 31st, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

Wonderfull .... Seamed so real

On Monday September 6th, 2004, Choronzon (235) writes:

I love your poetry. This is so sad. Such a great write.

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i really love this! i think everyone has felt this way before..awesome job dude!

On Friday June 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

awesome...this is one of my favorites..

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

total wowness. whoa...this was pretty heavy duty. the title made my stomach drop. incredibly dark, unforgettable. this one will be on my mind.

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

awesome, awesome work. In a sense.. this was perfect. *shrugs* I don't know what else to say. :::OLd

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

*stunned* such a powerful and aming poem, great job, going into my favorites ~Emptyness~

On Monday February 16th, 2004, physicalgraffiti (64) writes:

if i can feel it i love it. This one i can feel in every inch of my body. Stunning

On Monday December 29th, 2003, An Expired Member (63) writes:

im speechless, nice write.

On Monday December 29th, 2003, Daemonicus (639) writes:

:O im reading... she is an enemy? maybe... but I read on and the last four lines... :O she is you. gee ill have to read more of yours

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, Tracer (140) writes:

such anguish in this write...I felt every word...^vTracerv^

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

'Take that film, Off her eyes, Stuff her mouth, With tasty lies.' we all have that nine inch nail deep inside of us, it's our sins crucified; sometimes they surface & fcuk w/ us;comfort your hurt, love it, it'll turn around and kiss you back.the lit

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

the little girl will then kick some ass! Leave the pouring rain outside.. .

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, suicideseason (2145) writes:

my god...you write with so much feeling.and twice as much pain.you make me feel what you feel.very nice flow,too.all around,an excellent work.~season

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, stitch (78) writes:

i can totally identify with this one torn...it wrenches my heart...good write

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