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"Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind

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1.

two graceful fingers

expertly cradle

the cigarette;

manicured, red nails

flash through the haze

2.

curdled smoke pours from its

vile like haunted milk

3.

the girl watches as

her heartbroken mother

shakily sucks the smoke into

her lungs

4.

wispy, mellow ecstasy flows and pours

soothing the mind,

casting a pallor

over the severity of life

5.

the mist hung about the town

like cigarette smoke

clinging to a smoker's deathbed

6.

the package that he offers you is

larger than a cigarette pack

but smaller than a breadbox,

it is clearly not the diamond ring you

are hopping for.

7.

a grungy black boot stomps

in a volatile manner,

extinguishing a

lingering glow

8.

angry fingers snatch

from between my lips,

this eternal craving.

a disappointed question

flickers in the eye of

my best friend.

9.

i am ashamed

of my poison

infused innards,

though i deny it.

cancerous and rotting

between your lips, i seep

into your lungs and may

never be ejected.

10.

hacking, coughing

and glaring

as they pass,

"those smokers!

uneducated fools,

how dare they!"

11.

black ringed eyes gaze

skywards

as smoke creeps out of bruised lips

and slithers towards

the stars

12.

a handsome youth

clutches a billiard queue

in four fingers, and his cigarette

with the fifth

he looks up, sees me watching,

and winks.

13.

a cigarette is to death

as a cradle is to life




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On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1105) writes:
"the mist hung about the town like cigarette smoke" Stunning line/allusion; perfect for the poem. "vile like haunted milk" A fantastic metaphor. (I think you meant hoping, not hopping in #6? Unless it's something a little more clever than I saw;i suppose


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1105) writes:
...it could work). "cancerous and rotting" Perfect! I liked the format a lot. Gibson wrote something called: "Thirteen Views of a Cardboard City", similar style but fictional prose, not poetry, & definately a different tale. I would've liked to have seen


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1105) writes:
...seven more views: the full pack, if you will, but I felt this poem on many levels; it cut deep into my own used lungs: Verse 3 was powerful. The Views are black, white & bruised eternal. It's a marvelous piece; well done!


On Tuesday June 27th, 2006, Astra Dei (644) writes:
god i loved this. . . its flowed so well. and those last lines really captured the whole of it so well.


On Tuesday February 21st, 2006, Solace (1425) writes:
Never do you cease to amaze me with your delicate words so poignantly phrased...a tightly projected piece that augments its theme with brilliant eloquence and forethought...


On Monday February 20th, 2006, Alanarchy (1679) writes:
Left me bedazzled and ever glad I quit. Thanks for this.


On Monday February 20th, 2006, Raven (378) writes:
I keep coming back to read this, and meaning to comment, ... but finding myself at a complete loss each time. Your snapshots are beautiful and precise... winding around each other, until the last one leaves me gasping for breath.


On Tuesday November 22nd, 2005, James_the_Saint (132) writes:
This is so amazing, The description puts me in each ones place. Lovely.


On Saturday October 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:
love it!!!oh fuck i love it!


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (58) writes:
ali... i fucking love this, this is amazing. coincidence you lebelled it number twelve? i think not! haha. but seriously, this is incredible. im favoritizing it. youre an amazing writer.


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:
i am never disappointed when i read one of your writes, they are always refreshing and unique, #7 was my favorite ~kristy


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, James_the_Saint (132) writes:
Oh this is glorious! I am so In Love with you.


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, Possesion (192) writes:
this was....great.


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, Esau (279) writes:
excellent. simply excellent.


On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, Drea (930) writes:
June sent me the link to read this, and I'm so glad she did. This was wonderful. This was written so well.


On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, evolve (2294) writes:
..marvelous.



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