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break the mirror

fall off
bleed
get back on the horse
bleed ever more
i see weakness in the mirror
i see disgust

shatter

thousands of pieces
a million times my face
disappointment
everywhere
repulsive
lowly
revolting
hold on to the image
never let it go

crumble

shards of me
buried within
calling forth the essence of being
red relics
no longer reflections
red remains
no more disappointment
red reminders
beautiful
not disgusting
the image
no more than a nightmare
a recollection
red shards
a shimmering jewel
pain
like a symphony of relief
blood and glass
a magic wand
whisper one word
it'll all disappear
just pain
bloody shards
enjoy the sensation
the feeling
the numbness
the sharpness
absorb
the hot
flowing
beauty
breathe it
lick it
smear it
be freed

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On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

I feel this in my heart everyday...very very very very very very very very very very good

On Monday June 21st, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (122) writes:

i love this! and thanks for your comments by the way! theres just so many mirrors waiting to be broken, to be felt... beautiful

On Thursday December 18th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:

serisouly ali this one is .. personal. for you. for me. for everyone. This poem has made me cry. yes, personal indeed.

On Thursday December 18th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:

wow. this is .. you really took the words out of my mouth in this one. I'm full of shame for not being able to provide the right eulogy that this poem deserves. This one really touched me. deep down inside

On Sunday December 14th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

'i see weakness in the mirror' I love the broken staind-glass refracted-reflective red mirror feel of the style to this peice, like shattered thoughts; shards shimmering w/ poetry jewels.

On Monday December 8th, 2003, Alanarchy (1611) writes:

You've made me a fan of your writing. This was so sincere and bitter. I can feel your words slapping me in the face. ...intense.

On Saturday December 6th, 2003, purr_verse (1483) writes:

i liked this a lot... the mindmirror always interests me. Nice style - as ash said. :) purr

On Saturday December 6th, 2003, ashrain (18) writes:

I really like your style. And I really like this poem. I like it so much its going on my favs. :) Keep writing, you do beautiful work. ~ash

On Saturday December 6th, 2003, manunkind (89) writes:

wow. thanks :)

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