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Orchids in summer

Life eternal
Aura flowing as Quicksilver
Body like metallic mercury
Eyes like orchids in the summer sun
~~~***~~~***~~~***~~~
Everything you've dreamed for
With nothing to become
A life with eternal suffering...
I confess my evil to you...
I live for you...I breath for you
Waking up in the morning is a privilege...
Speaking to you is a fuckin honor
~~~***~~~***~~~***~~~
I'm on my knees
Because now I'm on my own
And I'm begging...please
Give me one minute
Something to honor, praise, admire...
I've got nothing with out you
Don't leave me..dont bid me adiue
I've got nothing with out you
~GoNe~

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On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:

'Body like metallic mercury' Nice flow; feels like blood dripping, cut, desperate, spilling... a lost & lusted confession drowned; gone/ beautifully painful.

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (750) writes:

Great rhythm to this piece! Ciao, T/S

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, Midnight Orchid (158) writes:

I like the first two stanza and the last part of the third stanza. I particularly like the first two lines. =-MO-=

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

kinda creepy in a sence, Great write though, loved it.~~~Grave

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, bloody LOVEly (107) writes:

definately fuckin creepy...but maybe its just the music im hearing in the backround...wow....i wish i could confess my evil...and feel like liquid metallic mercury.awesome write,man. +_+

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

The ending was so lingering, makes you want to find out more! Very beautiful choice of words. Awesome work. ~L

On Monday March 1st, 2004, -Oz- (174) writes:

"Eyes like orchids in the summer sun" nice man nice...~oZ~

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