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Push me under

Shove me under...
Push me deeper in this ice-cold lake
Watch me strive for a breath before my lungs fill with water
Can you see my eyes...?...Or are your hands around my neck in the way?
I'm crying...but it wouldn't matter to you...
Could you realize...I fucked up my hopes in a single day
I lost all reason
In less then a passing season
I damned myself to this...
I shall never forgive my self for the mistake that befell upon you
~GoNe~

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On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, bpathos (21) writes:

I liked the imagery.

On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

............... (SPEECHLESS) :::::FALLS ON FLOOR::::::

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

I've felt this way so many times in my life... again you express feelings very very well... Another great write :)

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

intense....I like how the coversation going on in your head is so realistic...good one

On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

...wow...i don't even know what to say...sorry:)tim

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