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The Leap You Took To Big

I left my security on that star in the sky
I have a secret...
Of me not being I
You clipped my wings-
Your the bastard who wont let me fly
I need you to understand-
The ice is melting...
Along with the sun of desert sand
The feelings I haven't felt
The leap I took to big
How I'm about to fall and not about to land
~GoNe~

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On Thursday December 6th, 2007, Circe Avalon (183) writes:

Very good work, stucture is unquie.

On Thursday April 28th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:

Very short, but very descriptive. "You clipped my wings, YOu're the bastard that won't let me fly" I'm sure we've all had this feeling. I love it- The write, not the feeling ~*~Tart~*~

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, -Oz- (173) writes:

"How I'm about to fall and not about to land"....wow i feel like that practically 24/7....it's no fun....wonderus write...~oZ~

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

"You clipped my wings- Your the bastard who wont let me fly" Wow... Supressed rage kinda thing... LOVE! ~Wish Upon A Star

On Monday January 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Sounds like you made a decision you were'nt ready to take... but there is hope! You write awesome poetry so you have that!

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