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foreshadowing a death

I'll lay on your grave just to tell you i love you,
A pulse
My heartbeat
is all you need to know
and all i wish to hear

But i wont

Your ghost will sit at the edge of my bed as I sleep,
Dance with me when rain falls so sadly, outlining your figure,
Watch me walk through the crowd toward the stage,
Listen to the song pouring from my heart, by words unspoken,
Cradle my heart when I realize your gone,
and put me back together

When I am Finally Dead...

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On Tuesday August 21st, 2007, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

Just absolutely classic, brilliant piece. Perfectly wrought. -Carl

On Monday April 18th, 2005, Dark_Goddess (20) writes:

My father took his life when I was 18 and he was the only family I had, I can feel what you say.

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, island warrior (300) writes:

Captivating piece.

On Saturday January 8th, 2005, Gideon Lost (187) writes:

Melancholy and dark and beautiful. Mourning is so personal yet you share it so well. This was heart felt.

On Saturday January 8th, 2005, Anth (1571) writes:

you know how i feel about this work, it is mesmorizing.my heart stopped for the duration i read,a timeless work. i cant do justice with my words

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