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A creation of my hopelessness

Creation
is it a timeless wonder
where pain is unknown
a heartbreak
out lives a heartbeat

what more of a perfect world
can be created with purity
running amongst sharp rocks...

If only i had your wings,
it is a devistating crossing
over an ocean of tears,
only to get to you...
and id brave being burned
at the stake a thousand times
before i ever gave up...

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On Saturday July 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (20) writes:

amazing, breath taking, i'm overwhelmed

On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Anth (1611) writes:

seems to read differently now that i return, as if it was mirrored, as it is, a thousand more

On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:

First time in a damn long time that I've read something that made me feel so much. The last verse is imprinted on my eye lids and etched on my soul. I experienced the ecstasy and pain that comes from a martyr's burning all at once. Definitely a fave.

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, island warrior (302) writes:

Awesome write.

On Monday December 20th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

*is speechless.literally, damn*

On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

such intense passion and feeling,longing despair and hope in this, a poem ill not forget

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