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sits upon an open book
holding a violin
hoping someone would just look

walks upon pages of un written music
pulls out a bow and places it quietly upon the strings
watching as you pass by

reading between the lines of forgotten notes
playing the sadness that seems to envelope my every move
you do not look, you do not even hear the cries

screamed back at you ten times the power
but you are deaf
and do not notice that i would just long for you to hear
the sadness that the world creates in me
the sadness that i play for the world
but it is
only you can not hear me

and so i have played this song
the first
and the last time
that i spilled my heart out
and got it rejected yet again



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On Saturday July 1st, 2006, Sin (1641) writes:
a moment caught and frozen perfectly...the pain pours out of this piece and it read so flawlessly ~kristy


On Thursday May 20th, 2004, Instant Insanity (755) writes:
Good Work, very nice


On Monday May 17th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
So Perfect. Really. Just Amazing. A Lovely Thing You Have Written. So Sad. GPhD.


On Monday May 17th, 2004, missanthropic (48) writes:
your beautifully melody has paused my chaos...i hope you play again...


On Monday May 17th, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
someone *is* listening


On Monday May 17th, 2004, Zophiel (350) writes:
a somber dirge, beautiful in its melancholy


On Monday May 17th, 2004, Evil (543) writes:
this is absolutely beautiful. wonderful flow. excellent lines. i wouldnt change this for the world. splendid work, darling.


On Monday May 17th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Oh hopeless, this is stunning. "walks upon pages of un written music pulls out a bow and places it quietly upon the strings" something stirring, beautiful, but sadly unheard. I felt this one, simply amazing. -L


On Monday May 17th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Nice flow to this one - my favourite lines are "watching as you pass by reading between the lines of forgotten notes". Ciao, T/S


On Monday May 17th, 2004, anth (1612) writes:
an epic song of darkness portrayed in words of light,so sad and haunting,that last verse really echoed in me, superb work(hugs)



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