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She dances as though what you say doesn?t hurt
Wallows in self pity as she slowly turns to dirt
She is the one
The only true love
Who can come in your life and make it all work

Problems of her own never seem to get her down
But when it overwhelms her she finds her ways to cool herself down

Along with the edge of a dagger
Flowing smoothly with her baby like skin

No touch of roughness
No sense of rage

Only when she starts to cut
Her blood begins to stain the page
Wallowing in self pity
Her own friends she doubts

When a boy came and ruined it now look at the way things turned out

More blood now comes just not from the wrist
Only this time her agony wont end in self bliss

~ to my friend.... you know who you are and that i love you...



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On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, TheArtOfX (104) writes:
very well written. You got your emotions across well here, I cant believe I just found your work... another good write...


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
i am impressed, your emotional honesty serves you well.......keep up the fight.....urban


On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
Nice, i enjoyed this. -fairy-


On Friday March 26th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
This is great! I know how these things go, broken hearts are hard to mend, just be there for this friend and make sure they know your there.


On Friday March 19th, 2004, K_Love (684) writes:
Great work, lots of sadness, it reminds me of some things and makes me think. Great write thanks for sharing Kirsten~


On Friday March 19th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
So heart breaking.. It reminds me of my friend. A beautiful piece drenched in sad images. Awesome work. ~L



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