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Captured and Forgotten

stuck.... in a whirlpool

....that does nothing but bring me down....

caught.... in this eclipse

....that has caused me to drown....

screaming.... into this black whole of darkness

....and yet no one can hear a sound....

cutting.... into shreds

....the threads of my life....

...then putting them back together again...

just..... like..... before

sinking.... into sand

....grains pulling at me....

a... thousand... souls

calling..... for release

falling..... into this crease

the broad valley.... created to hold everything...

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On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

this one swept me away, with its feeling and structure, that last line was stunning

On Monday April 5th, 2004, Zophiel (419) writes:

You captured with the title and kept me the words.

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, PointlessX (47) writes:

I enjoyed it very much, it was like my own poem "Nowhere to be found"--nice work--PointlessX

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

this is good stuff...i like the feeling of being lost with in yourself...but the...was used a little too much...

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