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as i sit and cry
i notice you trying to comfort me
you say that there are people here
that are willing to help
havent found them yet
but you say finding them is easier then i may think
i wish that were true
my life lately has been going down the drain
my parents treat me one way
then the next second change their minds
the people at my school are fake
the teachers there never truly help
they just go along in their fake way
making faulse conclusions
my friends may cut
theres nothing i can do
ive tried so hard to tell them
but my mind is also full of mass confusion
and i feel as though i may unwind
and i want too
ive never felt this way before
i just dont care anymore
just leave me be
because you just dont want to help me
even if you did
you wouldent be able to
im just a star lost in the massiveness of this universe
just sitting and waiting for my chance to show you
that im not who you may think i am



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On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, Zophiel (356) writes:
This speaks to me greatly. No need for rhyme or pretty combination of words. Just emotion worn on the sleeve.


On Sunday April 4th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (420) writes:
i like this. it reminds me of a similar situation ive had. youre a talented writer. =D


On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
This is yet another great one! Remember I'm here if you wanna talk.


On Monday January 19th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
im just a star lost in the massiveness of this universe just sitting and waiting for my chance to show you that im not who you may think i am.. wow.. :o) thanks for posting



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