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lonliest child

the lonliest child lost in the wind
hoping someday someone will come
and save this lost soul within

no one wants to save me
no one even cares
tell me why should i live?
when i already gave all that i can give...

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On Monday May 17th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

those first 3 lines really moved me, elegant and touching work

On Friday February 6th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

oh splendid work, hopeless. i love it, and there's a lot of emotion there too

On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

a most heartfelt plea......well done urban

On Friday December 26th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

your poems are so short, but they get the point across, I love how you write (u write from the heart), always do this and think this way and you can never go wrong.

On Sunday December 14th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

Some one will see your soul one day I'm sure.. the waiting is the thing that hurt the most.. wonderfull written . Monkey

On Tuesday December 2nd, 2003, whispers in the night (14) writes:

:sigh: yet again you can read my mind suga....~cid

On Saturday November 29th, 2003, spaniellie (89) writes:

you have more in you to give to the world, i can tell by your write. dont let all the shitty people in this world get you down. there are a few good people here.

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, Alanarchy (1697) writes:

I've felt that way before. You just have to find something that makes you happy. writing, at least for me, is one thing that does just that. your feelings were well expressed here. Good write.

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