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Imagine a gentle breeze,
That carries a rotting stench.
Animals adapting to please,
Pacing an unholy trench.

Envision a rage,
A jealous fit.
An innocent stage.
A common fuse lit.

Beings of pure beauty,
Painted with doubt.
Misjudging duty.
Devout.

Faithfully referring our hate,
With a wink and an honest smile.
A short kindness shown too late,
Leaving question to compile.

Creating a power.
A supernatural vent.
Our longings devour.
Emotions invent.

Soothing a passion dismissed.
Wrapped in familiar regret.
A heartfelt twist.
An Attempt to forget.

Relaxed in delay,
Surrounded,
By the threat of dismay,
We have founded.



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On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
very interesting, and it does indeed get the reader thinking. Good Write ~*~Tart~*~


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
sublimely thought provoking and kind of entrancing. awesome work.


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:
amazing visions were implanted in my mind......i enjoyed this immensely....*goes to read more*...****-chris


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, TheArtOfX (105) writes:
oh! hell yeah! the title, the first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, and seventh stanzas all rocked. wait.. thats all of them... well there ya go! :)


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, TheArtOfX (105) writes:
as for an actual comment... the way you used imagery and still got the flow and rhyme scheme down so well... amazing. i like this a lot, very well done MGood


On Friday March 12th, 2004, Nadir (630) writes:
Ill read this one again. I like the way you write. I could decribe why, but it seem kind of pointless. The way I like it is obvius and clear in every way I think of it. Tiger


On Monday March 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:
this is beautifully savage. i dig this one! way to be!


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
every line so masterful creates more and more images till you get to the end with such a vision of awe its awesome poetry



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