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Blood, Honey, and Water

I recall the lazy whisper
Like music
To manipulate my blue lust
Stop
Then shake my shadow
Sleep bitter winter moon
Rusting beauty
Under a black garden
Use me
I am not essential
What love
A mad purple sea
Boiling with me
Scream frantic moment
Flood my sky
Leave the void
I will drive you out
Above weakness
And death

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On Sunday September 24th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (446) writes:

But I still love this. Even in these days when even inside happiness or excitement; other things are fading fast.. this still manages to cause sparks. Well done. Thank you. Please write more. I'm thirsty for people like you.

On Sunday September 24th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (446) writes:

My last comment on this piece absolutly sucked. I'm afraid I still haven't got anything better to say. I never seem to get better at this whole commeting thing.

On Saturday March 25th, 2006, monalisamarie (146) writes:

oh my...this is so beautuful....

On Friday February 25th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (312) writes:

a collection of words i see nicely done -kitty

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Sin (1622) writes:

this read so sleek and sensual in my head...i will have to thank Railway for suggesting this, wonderful write ~kristy

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:

womderful... i like

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

i am in shock that this hasn't recieved more comments than this....there is only one thing to do to make sure this one gets noticed more...*faves*.....****-chris

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, manywalks (947) writes:

Yes, it should have gotten more thus far. Knight's comment made it catch my eye, and for that I'm gratefull, wouldn't want to misss this any longer than I have. ~ mw

On Sunday October 24th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (446) writes:

I love some of the images in this...but...I couldnt pick them out..the flow of this is so perfect,It alomst doesn't feel right to tear it apart...wonderful work...

On Sunday October 24th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (446) writes:

This feels,to me...Like real gothic poetry...it reminds me of the kind of stuff I used to read...the reason I loved this kind of poetry....im sorry...this is a really bad comment,ha

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:

I like this a lot. Seductive and provocative. Yet subtle and still. Great write. And may I say... you're positively beautiful, yourself. -Glass

On Saturday May 29th, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

Above weakness and death..nice..-Kefka

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