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An unusual friend.....

Looking back to when we first met
i remember seeing you outside
looking in upon me..
i stared at you in contemplation
for given the chance you surely
would take my blood..
It was in your nature now i see
my little friend with tiny wings
my mosquito..
Time and time again i'd watch you
buzzing around and trying to enter
the glass barring your way..
and we developed in these times
i became fond of your presence
day after day..
I was always amazed that you
never left to pursue other things
it was fate i guess..
then one morning when i woke,
i looked out and saw your
little carcass..
laying still and cold
i felt a little depressed
my little one..
though your presence is gone
i still think to the lesson
i learned from you..
for you spent your entire life
chasing a dream you could
not achieve..

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On Thursday March 11th, 2004, Reverend Machine (90) writes:

Nice indeed, how i felt for your friend, chasing is all we have sometimes, as a means to pass time till death...-DG

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

Mosquitos try to eat me but i hunt them down with a lighter and hairspray...entertaining read i must say.~~~Grave

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, unusual_blood (94) writes:

write it ... this poem does alot, stirs up feelings and thoughts. only you ...

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, unusual_blood (94) writes:

My dearest Arik, like tim said, only you could do this. only you. not only is it a great poem that garentees a lil laugh at the end, it makes you think about what, as jaded wings said, could have inspired you to

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Anarkisst (10) writes:

This is excellent Methos. Probably my favorite by you. Wonderful words, perfectly placed.

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

laying still and cold i felt a little depressed my little one.. that was awsome.. but you know it's your fault that it died without it's dream becomming reality.. you had a feelng of power im sure. damn mosquito killer.. *raises a fist* :o)

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:

lol...this has cheered me up..which is achieving a lot...very good..-l-

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Seraphic (289) writes:

I am at a cross between smiling and tearing up...it's different I'll give you that, I really liked it *~seraph~*

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

I hate mosquitos. They are the size of small dogs here... They carry little children away. I will smack everyone I see. :) Great write. haha :::OLd

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:

only someone as profound as you could learn such wisdom from a hideous ,filthy,flying hypodermic...i really love this,brother.very inspiring.~tim

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

You actually manage to evoke a sense of pity in me for a mosquito... I didn't think that was possible. :) Must be a great poem!! purr

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

I can't help but wonderwhat inspired this....WoW...I am at a loss for words...sigh...

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Evil (491) writes:

awesome. dude..its a mosquito..haha..thats great._-=Evil=-_

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