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No More...

If you ever call again you should know
that i'm not the man you once left behind
you twisted me with your vile words
and left me obsessed with your love
but my obsession only turned to desire
and my desire grew wings and lifted to pain
and pain fell deep within solitude
and solitude left me only with hatred
hatred spawned a thousand hells
and hell gave way to this nightmare
and this nightmare will be the end
of loving you...

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On Thursday November 16th, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (94) writes:

beautiful.

On Saturday March 19th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:

wonderful flow -kitty

On Thursday March 10th, 2005, -Oz- (173) writes:

alas, i've remembered why i bookmarked this more than a year ago....-Oz

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:

I love that. So true

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

My desire grew wings and lifted to pain, OMG I dont know what to say, I feel this and then some...I am again speechless.

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

i think all the other poets summed this one up, well done.~~~Grave

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, unusual_blood (94) writes:

i am speechless. Truly speechless. you really hit it home with this one. I ... I have no words. Let this silence be to you a sign of how well you can write, taking away and saying all the readers' thought and words.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (343) writes:

great style and execution...emotional.....great job...-l-

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:

i can relate completely. i love it

On Saturday January 17th, 2004, DeathSentance (20) writes:

very deep...there's a lot of thought in it...it's good

On Thursday January 15th, 2004, -Oz- (173) writes:

WOW i love this.....~YeStErDaY~

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, Drea (937) writes:

so well done. just left me in awe. the flow pulls the reader in and just takes them on this journey. *favorite* ~Drea~

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

Just fucking awsome Methos....you have been sneaking into my brain again...you little peeping tom....cause this is exactly the way I feel right now with the stuff i m going through...bravo

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

clever and effective, and I agree with Monkey's 'powerful flow' point. purr

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

A perfect decription ending love...**jwd**

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Ophelia (305) writes:

Loves bitter end, if only one could just trun and walk away, ,,,O.

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, birdwell (177) writes:

yes indeed, this was a great poem, it flow like water, and said so much with very little, perfect. ~db~

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:

this was straight forward.. and powerfull in the flow. I loved it.. Monkey

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Stellar (47) writes:

This is amazing and therapeutic. Good write. <3

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