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at nineteen she stood, a woman by right
dressed in garbs of white, she steps off
to effectuate her dreams, simply put, to achieve
her soul incandescent, shining the path before her
negligent to the world, its cruelty, its deceit
a sacrificial lamb, setting out to the slaughter

twenty one, not the dream she had envisioned
confused with the dire obstacles littered around
that have battered and beaten her along this journey
she sits underneath gray clouds, resting her jaded mind
the path longer and more incomplete than expected
a wounded soldier, on the path to defeat

twenty three, weeps into the wild air
now she lies in darkness’s dreary realm
wrapped in blackened leather, innocent no longer
her life guarded now, too much pain infiltrated
the heart she once held high, now, left behind
a death row sentence, no parole in sight

twenty four, unearthed itself for her
lost and alone, merely wrapped in rags
a path no longer in sight, fences line the horizon
she sits upon the bleak pavement
absorbed with the contents of life
another homeless, people passing by, trying not to witness

twenty five, bleeds into her universe
a draft of life blows, as cold as the blade
she wields in her freezing hand
slowly without remorse her life
ceases…..
another unmarked grave, in societies blind eye…












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On Saturday July 9th, 2005, Sin (1637) writes:
this touched me and brought me to tears...theres nothing i can say to praise you that hasnt already been said...but i was here, i read, and i left in awe ~kristy


On Friday January 9th, 2004, Aurora_Light (574) writes:
powerfull words that speak of a truth noone whats to see or hear, ur words make them see it make them feel it


On Sunday January 4th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
The landscape you wove together with the passing of time and innocense was very affective. I felt I saw/witnessed the ages pass into awareness of different sorts for her. Enjoyable read...but so very sad. ~JMDW~


On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
Ahh the depressing way in which time passes.. This is brilliant, with a beautiful ending. ~Wish


On Monday December 29th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
I think I read this 3 times now. This is chilling in it's reality and sadness.


On Friday December 26th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
saddness grabs at you from every verse and it holds you calling you back, very nice...........................O.


On Thursday December 25th, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (80) writes:
great write. i read this four times over and i could read it forever without getting bored of it. the sadness really fucking hits you, but it's kind of detached in a way. i really can't find the words to explain this. but i love it.


On Thursday December 25th, 2003, purr_verse (1437) writes:
sad and effective, strong storyline/concept. powerful work. purr


On Thursday December 25th, 2003, suicideseason (2144) writes:
Methos...this is brilliant.as always.you paint a flawless portrait of this sad,sad downward spiral.i'm with you,brother.you really know how write.and you do so with so much emotion.real emotion that i can feel.rock on,brother!~season


On Thursday December 25th, 2003, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
a sorrowful plight, articulated in high fashion, i can sense great ages of pain; and helpless contemplation.....this as well as you are so very deep......well done poet.....urbanhumility



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