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"The Child" by Methos

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His shirt tucked neatly in
hands placed perfectly on his lap
his feet still....unmoving
Not a smudge nor smear on his cleansed face
Strong and structured, hair neatly combed
he sits
in perfect posture
 
It's his eye's I notice
the fear
the pain
of the hand that strikes
the pressure of excelling
petrified of failure
he sits
in perfect pose
 
This perfect statue of a child
molded so perfect
that it seems
the childhood has been taken
and this shell is all that remains.




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On Thursday July 29th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
ohhhhh this hits very hard...beautifully expressed


On Friday January 30th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:
very creative piece,full of draining recollections.made me think of things i thought were dead


On Saturday January 17th, 2004, -Oz- (173) writes:
i hate watching little kids get pussy whiped by their mothers or who ever...they loose their character...they definatly turn into statues.....sadly *sniff sniff*~YeStErDaY~


On Friday December 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
GAve me goose bumps.....


On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
This poem reminds me of a song I love by Alanis Morresette "We'll love you, just the way you are, if you're perfect." Some people just shouldn't be parents. To restict their child from living the life that is rightfully theirs...


On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
that just angers me beyond words...


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, frost bite (48) writes:
'and this shell is all that remains' that is a perfect statement! loved it


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
I was unsure in the start but then it grabed me. I feel the sorrow and pain "perfect statue of a child" to me this has said more then any work here, thank you.................O.


On Monday November 17th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:
this reminds me of my brother... i like it, it's good


On Monday November 17th, 2003, Drea (934) writes:
vivid images. i enjoyed this a lot. ~Drea~



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