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Desire

Flesh laced with satin dresses
  Curves of scuplted goddesses
        Dancing
          Sweating
            Breathing
         Harder
       Faster
  Luscious ruby lips
      Batting blue eyes
    Soft yet meaningful whispers
          Moving
             Closer
        Together
   Passionate loving kisses
        Soft skin molded together
      Blissful delight
               Goodbyes
            Sweet Dreams
         Sunrise
     Flesh laced with satin dresses
               Desire

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On Friday February 6th, 2004, Twilight (2103) writes:

i loved this one. every word molded tp describe the feeling exactly. becautifull done methos..you know the true meaning of desire.

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, unusual_blood (94) writes:

I thought I'd commented on this one already. Different style here, but it fits in just right. It has a sort of rythm to it that only increases the desire it has already provoked. Seems like you are starved, and this desire is your lover.

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

Mmm...this provokes desire. Excellent wording and phrasing. Beats into your head...

On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

A pleasure to read! Your style really works for me... ~Wish

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, suicideseason (2146) writes:

very nice,Methos.this one escaped me til now.very passionate.rock on,bro!~season

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

Such poetry enclosed and wraped in lust and hunger beautiful..........O.

On Monday November 17th, 2003, Drea (938) writes:

i love the wording. it flows together so well. wonderful ~Drea~

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