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Ambition led me here...

Coldness comes into this world of mine
shattered dreams and sands of time
reflections of a past so long ago
flood the waters that once were low
beautiful sounds fill my ears
bringing with them warming tears

The cold draft of life whips into my soul
with so much and so little left to go
i look for shelter; i look for safety
from this cold that envelopes me
finding only the footprints i left behind
with memories of warmer times

Further and further; forward i stride
with nothing left but anguished pride
it's then i fall to my weathered knees
victim of the bitter cold breeze
surely this is where it ends
so far, from where i began

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On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Im speechless, lovely poem.

On Friday January 30th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

what can i say.****

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

Hmm...I never commented on this. There are some excellent lines in this. They drip with...wistfulness? Thinking of how things have turned out? and I love the ending.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:

buetiful *tear*

On Monday January 5th, 2004, spaniellie (89) writes:

wow, you have a incredible way of bringing you message to people... well done, great write

On Friday December 26th, 2003, Evil (491) writes:

Makes me feel all cold inside..*shudders* o.O

On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

I love the way your words flow like a melody to some forgotten tune, truely beautiful..........O.

On Sunday December 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

All of your writing is beautiful. I really look up to you and consider you a true artist.

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:

wow. i too am speechless. this .. this poem is swarming with amazing lines and powerful emotions, this is a really reallY REALLY good poem .. i must go and stick it up on my wall ..

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

love the ending. very tragic. bu i also agree with drea. also beautiful. you speak the feeling well. nicely sone.

On Saturday December 13th, 2003, Jadedwings (356) writes:

wow nothing left but anguished pride.....great line I know that kind of pride personally....indeed...good job

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:

.....speechless....I'll come back when I think of something to say...~Delilah~

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, asailorsangel (39) writes:

You reach out and pull your reader in, a style that envokes your reader to looker deeper within themselves..a sign of pen in touch with much more than the world in view...

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, asailorsangel (39) writes:

(correction) to look

On Monday November 17th, 2003, Drea (920) writes:

"it's then i fall to my weathered knees victim of the bitter cold breeze surely this is where it ends so far, from where i began".....beautiful ~Drea~

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