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My Little Star

Twinkle Twinkle
My little star
up so high
up so far
I wish that I
could twinkle too
not for the world
just for you.

Twinkle Twinkle
My little star
why do you have
to be so far
so far from me
and I from you
Tell me my star
What shall we do?

Twinkle Twinkle
My little star
You don't have
to be so far
Just fall to the ground
It's not so high
So we can be together
You and I.

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On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

this was prettier than a snowflake :)

On Saturday April 29th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:

this was another cool ryhme pattern and story.. and i liked it

On Friday December 10th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

This had a very gentle, soothing feel to it. I liked the idea that the object you desire as a far away star. Nicely done. ~Ship!

On Saturday September 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:

ooh wow in in love with this nice work

On Monday July 19th, 2004, Dommi (122) writes:

I absolutely loved this piece.. You are very talented. ^_^ Great work. I'm a fan hehe <3Dommi

On Monday January 12th, 2004, TornPaperDoll (74) writes:

aww..i love it. it has sucha smooth flow to it.TPD

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

oh wow! unexpected... reading the first stanza i thought "interesting", by the second, "hey this is really neat"... by the third, wow, how wonderful. i really like the metaphor here, unique

On Saturday January 10th, 2004, Methos (154) writes:

I love this...it is a work of passion and reflects emotions i can relate to...beautifully done killette..-Methos

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