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This heavenly floor I so vividly adore
Once in while
Turns a bark towards me.

The skies turn their eyes in a gray demise
Once in a while
And it frightens me.

As that distance narrows
Between the seen and the midst
I often ponder what I should do.

Should I sleep through the storm,
Or weather it's wrath?
Hefty choices, but few.

The former sounds so serene;
Luck would seek and I might receive
Because storms don't intrude on dreams,

But if I drift into slumber
As this storm burrows under
The chassis of my morale...

Would the loss of evolution
Turn into taste of dissolution?
A taste bitter, rotten, and foul.

I suppose a storm is better seen
Than one that is dreamt,
As I'd rather witness my life's event.

A storm without rains,
Carrying sorrows and pains.
A storm without floods,
Gushing emotional mud.
A storm without thunder,
Shaking me from under.
A storm without weather,
Just me and my tether.

I can hear the thunder rumbling
And see the clouds colliding,
And I won't shade my eyes
From that gray demise.

That thundering ascent is my life's event,
And a storm that doesn't kill,
Is a storm that will invent.




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On Sunday May 6th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:
This Was Epic-like and would make a great song, with all it's poetic expression and confession! Great Write! \Billy/


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Endifference (270) writes:
SHIT! Perfect delivery of the ethereal. That's my kind of vibe. -END-


On Monday May 24th, 2004, gracefullytorn (70) writes:
I liked this poem alot, the rhyming was at times strange, but it seemed to add to it more than take away.


On Monday May 24th, 2004, Death (30) writes:
I loved this poem. 'A storm without rains,Carrying sorrows and pains.' Great line.


On Monday May 24th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Wow, You Actually Included The Word Chassis In Your Work... And It, Well, WORKED! I Enjoyed This But I Must Say That The Flow Was A Little Bit Off. Great Otherwise. GPhD.



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