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Hope is good, or at least it should be bright and promising,
But it surfaces as my last resort, when dreams are taken from me.
Grand imaginations kindly ushering hope through holes,
Fostering painful realizations when inevitably they fold.

Hope is constantly abusive but always mannered well,
And it overly imposes upon my life's unfortunate hell.
If Hope should ever offer me a hand to get up, I would.
Even beaten with that hand I would open mine,
At least I hope I could.



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On Sunday December 5th, 2004, Twilight (2104) writes:
very thought provoking...a touching and intelligent piece."But it surfaces as my last resort, when dreams are taken from me." come on..how could anyone not feel that? this is priceless...nicely done.


On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:
hope springs eternal... iron will becomes reality when hope is continually lost... ultimately you become the hope my brother! Peace...


On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, suicideseason (2146) writes:
awesome!"Even beaten with that hand I would open mine, At least I hope I could." is the perfect ending!nice write!~season


On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1859) writes:
yea this needs more.. you remind me of me sometimes.. *gives sole a banana*


On Monday December 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:
i liked it, but i wanted to read more.



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