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Outcast

The hardest tear to cry is of,
Salty swine and crimson blood
When I'm finally forced to leave,
I doubt that anyone will grieve

The hardest death to die is when,
Either way the others win
It's unknown how I feel inside,
When my pain and joy collide

No one knows and no one cares,
It seems that God ignores my prayers
I'm not the same, I don't fit in,
And people act like it's a sin

I want to go, but I want to stay,
Everything seems so far away
And I'm sure that no one will mind,
If I leave this life behind

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On Wednesday May 31st, 2006, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

I really liked "The hardest death to die is when, Either way the others win" a different take on death I hadn't considered, intrigued.

On Sunday April 24th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:

great rhyme scheme. -All around great write- ~*~Tart~*~

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, eternal despair (72) writes:

i like it. thanx for the good read!!

On Friday August 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

The Tao Te Ching says, "Your responsibility is to just be, & not be this or that." Not fittin' in? It ain't a sin. NO SIN. Life is just what misery you make, along with the goodness you yourself create. You take turmoil very well. So take care. ~Shane~

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

"No one knows and no one cares, It seems that God ignores my prayers" is so very sad.the whole damned poem is.i can feel so much conflict.excellent.~tim

On Wednesday January 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

i us to feel the same way and have come to the conclution that it doesnt matter to me any more.

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