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Trace my scars with a silver pin
Hold my breath, and shove it in
Pulsate, bleed in perfect rhythm
Wrap my wounds in pure, white linen

I feel pain, but it feels good
It won't kill me, I wish it would
I sit here bored, thinking of a way
To make this my final, last day

They question me, they ask what's wrong
They want to hear me sing my songs
They want to call my mom and dad
Because I always feel so sad

I just want them to leave me be
There's nothing that is wrong with me
I just want something else to do
Instead of being just like you

They still think that I'll end my life
If someone leaves around a knife
They always try their best to spy
And see if they can make me cry

It seems they think that I'm not real
I'm just a doll, so I can't feel
And that's the thing that makes me mad
The fact that they make me feel bad

Make my scars with a rusted pin
Held my breath, felt it cut in
Trickle, sting in perfect streams
But I told them it was just a dream

They let me go, so I went home
I sat down and wrote this poem
I took some pills and went to bed
Tomorrow they will find me dead.




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On Sunday August 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
this is really great and i can definetly connect this to personal experience it reminds me of my poem WHY DID I BLEED?


On Friday August 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
If you were gonna kill yourself, you'd have done it. DON'T. This is probably the first and best 'suicide poem' I read on DP & I just joined. Don't give up. I respect you, & love your stuff. ~Shane~


On Monday December 1st, 2003, MindRape (886) writes:
Despite the fact that I REALLY distain from suicide poems, this one was well written. AND I do not believe you really want to kill yourself. I think you want to live but right now you know you're not and


On Monday December 1st, 2003, MindRape (886) writes:
instead, you seem to need something.....I suggest you find it and move on from your anger for it will only hold you back


On Monday December 1st, 2003, MindRape (886) writes:
P.S. I truely did enjoy reading this poem. It reminded me of some of my earlier pieces that are no longer in my portfolio



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