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"A World On It's Side" by bloody LOVEly

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when everything is upside down
turn around. look up. up is on the ground
look down, and your spinning round.
on this carousel.
the never ending ups and downs
rounds and rounds
whirling past blurred faces
some filled with smiles
while others frown
it's not easy to tell
heaven from hell
when everything is upside down.

 



© 2007 bloody LOVEly

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On Monday June 11th, 2007, -Oz- (173) writes:
you've still got that "thing" for writting that you've always had.


On Thursday May 31st, 2007, Freebird (624) writes:
Haha. Well done, and I can't agree more


On Thursday May 31st, 2007, carlosjackal (1724) writes:
This was like a wicked, brilliant lullaby tinged with the adult experience. Top Write! -Carl


On Wednesday May 30th, 2007, Midian (29) writes:
Nice! I really liked this one. I don't know exactly where you are comin from but, I take it as a sort of look in my prespective type of thing.


On Wednesday May 30th, 2007, Revisable Retina (148) writes:
clever little write you got here.. sounds like life to me good one man


On Wednesday May 30th, 2007, bloody LOVEly (111) writes:
how would this be classified?



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