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Would You Like Some Cheese With That Whine

You’re looking jaded
But I’m watching the sun fade
Talking about life
While I’m ready to live once I die
You hate these moments
I’m living them
Knowing they will pass
You keep looking back
I save that for nighttime dreams
Don’t hand me your burdens
On a platter of conversation
Because I’m fasting
Living off contemplation
Wake up and look beyond yourself
Pathetic and whining
I see you and move on

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On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:

haha this hit the spot this morning...i love it ~kristy

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Vampira (111) writes:

No one can say this better then you have here...this is perfect!^Vamp^

On Monday May 5th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

On Friday April 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

"Don’t hand me your burdens On a platter of conversation Because I’m fasting " that was absolutely great, i loved it

On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

yes! goddamn it, yes... i love it.

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, Seraphic (289) writes:

"Don't hand me your burdens on a platter of conversation, because I'm fasting" I love that line, very good poem

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

ahhh, its good to see ya back. i like this poem. It gives me a lot to think about right now.. :|

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

this is good shit dear, wonderful write. I like the line Wake up and look beyond yourself, it says alot about people who concentrate on their problems and don't let them go

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:

Nice write, know what you mean

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