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The Edge

I’m aching and I’m shaking
And I’m down on bended knees
And I’m praying and I’m begging
And I’m screaming help me please

The winds blowing and it’s raining
And I’m shaking on my knees
And I’m cold and I’m lonely
And I’m aching for release

I’m waiting and I’m watching
And I’m begging on my knees
And I’m yearning and I’m hurting
And I’m filled with this disease

The winds resting the rains dripping
And I’m sobbing on my knees
And I’m learning and I’m coping
And I’m long passed asking please

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On Monday April 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

This one I like alot. Like everyone else has already said works on many levels....alot like music. You are very talented. Thanks for sharing.

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

this is painful...reminds me what i carry inside..so well expressed though.

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, braindead_poet (577) writes:

i've read this a few times, and each time i can just shake my head at the overwhelming, overcoming of pain. very good write, thanks for sharing

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

beautiful... sad... hopeless... i feel these words, and i find it funny how you seem to be able to capture them in the same form they are in my mind... strange...

On Saturday April 5th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

I love the mystery behind this and a lot of your poems. It flows nicely, and it describes exactly what you want it to describe, but does not give away what it is you are describing. good stuff. :)

On Saturday April 5th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

oh yes, I'm quite the mystery :^P *laugh*

On Friday April 4th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

I like how it flows out of your mouth when you read it. I almost want to put a beat to it.

On Saturday April 5th, 2003, GothicBlack (266) writes:

very impressive LE, it has many different levels...of... pain? its hard to describe it in a single word. lol, anyways, great job! ~gothic~

On Friday April 4th, 2003, Armand (70) writes:

read this one several times trying to figure out the motivation... physical malady... mental anguish... broken heart... works on all levels and that is the beauty of this piece. well done.

On Friday April 4th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

i find this to be percfect i really liked the way of fllowed! it just made me connect to it! :) ~laterz

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

thnks... perfection...wow

On Friday April 4th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:

Very good poem! It flowed so well! Keep writing! :)

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