Within Your Eyes

I want to breathe you in
Crawl inside your head
Walk around for hours
Exploring thoughts unsaid

I want to taste your fear
And swim inside your eyes
Wrap up in your soul
And feel your anger rise

I want to lick your pain
Bathe in all your tears
Suffocate with memories
You’ve gathered through the years

I want to kiss your depth
And wallow in your sin
Feeling every single thing
You’ve ever felt within

I want to touch your anger
Linger in your pride
Soaking up the hatred
You buried deep inside

I want to smell your secrets
Inhaling all the lies
Relish in contentment
That floats apon your sighs

I want to hear your love
Trail fingers down your dreams
Soak my feet in happiness
Of endless laughter streams

I want to see your turmoil
Get lost inside the lust
Piled up in corners
Collecting passions dust

I want to grasp your innocence
Submerge inside your guilt
Tremble with perceptions
That I have never felt

I want to caress your consciousness
And lay beside your cries
Tremble with your presence
Engulfed within your eyes

More comments:

• On Wednesday, March 10, 2010, Wiccad (75) wrote:
  
  That was awesome, it flowed so well together, easy to read and just wonderful.Write on.
  
  
• On Wednesday, March 10, 2010, BlueLacey (3) wrote:
  
  Wow! I love it! I love the depth, and the detail to description. Love it!
  
  
• On Tuesday, September 15, 2009, Butterfly (112) wrote:
  
  Still to this day one of my singular favorite pieces.
  
  
• On Friday, February 29, 2008, urbanhumility (1350) wrote:
  
  eloquent and insightful......your words dwell within strong emotion..........well done my friend............urban
  
  
• On Friday, February 29, 2008, Ainsof (2120) wrote:
  
  wow... penetrating, the depth of imagination, the sense that each stanza brings... so thoughtful, so beautiful
  
  
• On Monday, December 31, 2007, Spiral Downward (406) wrote:
  
  The way this is so imaginative and descriptive yet never explains is funny! Nice Write!
  
  
• On Friday, December 8, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (88) wrote:
  
  took my breath a way.........LOVE IT
  
  
• On Monday, November 13, 2006, darth ren (34) wrote:
  
  this is so amazing. i am not worthy of commenting !!!!!!111111
  
  
• A former member wrote: being able to read this stuff is what I love about this site.. I simply loved it
  
  
• A former member wrote: Beautiful, very well done. I goes in my favorites. -Anton
  
  
• On Thursday, July 14, 2005, Butterfly (112) wrote:
  
  You know this poem was the first ever poem I read on this site and fell in love with it. It's been on my faves list for a long time and i don't think I have ever commented on it. Such a great write. Made me want to write to this standard.
  
  
• On Monday, May 16, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (42) wrote:
  
  Jesus, i read this before i bacame a dp member and now it mean s more to me than it did before. This is just downright amazing.
  
  
• A former member wrote: absolutely amazing. -heather lynn
  
  
• A former member wrote: beautiful.
  
  
• A former member wrote: This one made me think of a certain someone.........
  
  
• On Sunday, September 26, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (114) wrote:
  
  this is beautiful.. and though i shy away from rhyme you use the right words so that the rhythm swallows the rhyme and it doesnt ruin the peices potential. good write!
  
  
• A former member wrote: I love it. Quite intriguing
  
  
• On Friday, July 16, 2004, smurfalwaz (13) wrote:
  
  This has been a fav. for some time now and I am just now getting around to saying that I really enjoyed this poem.-Smurf
  
  
• On Monday, July 5, 2004, violetflames (10) wrote:
  
  yeah, a masterpiece most def. I am thankful that I've stumbled upon this one. I love it!
  
  
• A former member wrote: This is a masterpiece...keep up the good work. \m/ Mandy Lyn--