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Within Your Eyes

I want to breathe you in
Crawl inside your head
Walk around for hours
Exploring thoughts unsaid

I want to taste your fear
And swim inside your eyes
Wrap up in your soul
And feel your anger rise

I want to lick your pain
Bathe in all your tears
Suffocate with memories
You’ve gathered through the years

I want to kiss your depth
And wallow in your sin
Feeling every single thing
You’ve ever felt within

I want to touch your anger
Linger in your pride
Soaking up the hatred
You buried deep inside

I want to smell your secrets
Inhaling all the lies
Relish in contentment
That floats apon your sighs

I want to hear your love
Trail fingers down your dreams
Soak my feet in happiness
Of endless laughter streams

I want to see your turmoil
Get lost inside the lust
Piled up in corners
Collecting passions dust

I want to grasp your innocence
Submerge inside your guilt
Tremble with perceptions
That I have never felt

I want to caress your consciousness
And lay beside your cries
Tremble with your presence
Engulfed within your eyes

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On Friday February 29th, 2008, urbanhumility (1325) writes:

eloquent and insightful......your words dwell within strong emotion..........well done my friend............urban

On Friday February 29th, 2008, Ainsof (1733) writes:

wow... penetrating, the depth of imagination, the sense that each stanza brings... so thoughtful, so beautiful

On Monday December 31st, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:

The way this is so imaginative and descriptive yet never explains is funny! Nice Write!

On Friday December 8th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (109) writes:

took my breath a way.........LOVE IT

On Monday November 13th, 2006, darth ren (40) writes:

this is so amazing. i am not worthy of commenting !!!!!!111111

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, An Expired Member (7) writes:

being able to read this stuff is what I love about this site.. I simply loved it

On Thursday November 3rd, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Beautiful, very well done. I goes in my favorites. -Anton

On Thursday July 14th, 2005, Butterfly (123) writes:

You know this poem was the first ever poem I read on this site and fell in love with it. It's been on my faves list for a long time and i don't think I have ever commented on it. Such a great write. Made me want to write to this standard.

On Monday May 16th, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (49) writes:

Jesus, i read this before i bacame a dp member and now it mean s more to me than it did before. This is just downright amazing.

On Thursday April 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

absolutely amazing. -heather lynn

On Friday February 4th, 2005, braindead_poet (585) writes:

beautiful.

On Thursday February 3rd, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

This one made me think of a certain someone.........

On Sunday September 26th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (122) writes:

this is beautiful.. and though i shy away from rhyme you use the right words so that the rhythm swallows the rhyme and it doesnt ruin the peices potential. good write!

On Saturday July 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

I love it. Quite intriguing

On Friday July 16th, 2004, smurfalwaz (18) writes:

This has been a fav. for some time now and I am just now getting around to saying that I really enjoyed this poem.-Smurf

On Monday July 5th, 2004, violetflames (13) writes:

yeah, a masterpiece most def. I am thankful that I've stumbled upon this one. I love it!

On Wednesday June 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

This is a masterpiece...keep up the good work. \m/ Mandy Lyn--

On Sunday June 13th, 2004, Heart of Stone (33) writes:

This is amazing. I can feel it. I feel these unreal actions. I love this. Def. a Favorite now! -Heart

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, BleedSilver (377) writes:

Simply beautiful...I feel like I am missing something after reading a poem this beautiful.~Mikey

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

I think everyone else has said every compliment there is to say, you already know that this poem is awesome, so just add me to the list, awesome shit

On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (278) writes:

I liked the whole poem except for "I want to lick your pain" for some reason lick seems out of place. I can't currently think of anything better though.

On Sunday March 7th, 2004, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

Ever seen animals licking thier wounds? Same concept.... I think it works fine.

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Dekika (9) writes:

Wow, I'm not even sure what else to say. This is so awesome, no, that's an understatement. This has to be one of the best poems I've ever read. You have a great talent, run with it!!!

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:

awesome

On Friday February 6th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

you are too damn good."I want to see your turmoil Get lost inside the lust Piled up in corners Collecting passions dust " fucken loved that line. beautiful liquid

On Friday January 30th, 2004, changed_angel (59) writes:

This was FUCKING the shit!.....I wish i wrote this!(jealous)....I want to do the same to one "in the past"....awesome job!

On Friday December 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

nice its always nice to want to know sombody that close

On Friday December 12th, 2003, Jadedwings (361) writes:

this is so very beautiful...the flow the content everything came together to form a perfect vision of what real love really is

On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, Choronzon (238) writes:

Dude, great work.

On Sunday August 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

awsome it sayz alot !

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I liked it a lot. You put this in a way I don't think anyone could do better! Very Nice and Keep Writing.

On Monday July 7th, 2003, Silent_Poet (69) writes:

Delicious, absolutely delicious what you have captured right here. Wish someone could write something even REMOTELY like that for me. I felt your emotion. Wonderful! -SP

On Monday May 26th, 2003, braindeadpoet (129) writes:

I hope someday I care or at least want someone this much. Beautifully done!!!

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:

Nice..very deep. I liked it very much :) thx ~evil_bitch~

On Monday May 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

I LOVE your poem it puts in words every thing I want to do to my lover.It is a truely amazing piece!

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

word on

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, Sky Singer (225) writes:

if i had to chose an overall favortie piece in my list, this would be the one... you have SUCH a talent and you put something (a feeling, emotion, i'm not sure what) into words that i could not... absolutely outstanding

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

I really appriciate that, thank you:)

On Monday March 31st, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

This is truly amazing, I really can't think of anything else to say but that. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

On Sunday March 16th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

this piece has moved me. i love your poetry liquid. please do keep writing and posting here. :)

On Saturday March 8th, 2003, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (73) writes:

very nice...very

On Saturday March 8th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Sensational...you are an artist.

On Tuesday March 4th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:

That really is a quite excellent piece - you indeed achieved what you were "going for". Ciao, T/S

On Tuesday March 4th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:

Now renew you f*&^ing account before you get canceled and we are cheated of the chance to read more of your thoughts. : )

On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

Thank you. I devoured all of your works the first night I stumbled apon them. I was like a starving acholic being fed cough syrup and finding black label in the dusty corner of a hidden shelf!!

On Friday March 7th, 2003, Jonas (885) writes:

that's excellent simile

On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

alchoholic*

On Thursday February 27th, 2003, Malkavai (12) writes:

just WOW. Excellent work. I could actually "feel" the descriptions as I read them.

On Saturday March 1st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

EXACTLY what I was going for *bows smiling sheepishly* :) Thank you

On Thursday February 27th, 2003, Psuedonym (3) writes:

This is an inspired poem, good work.

On Thursday February 27th, 2003, changed_angel (59) writes:

Ah....the good and the bad aspects of love twisted around each other in the depths of the soul. The good and the bad....go hand and hand with each other in the discovery of hate in a forgotten reality. Its deep****

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

Everyone sees words on love when they read this beautiful piece, it speeks to them in their own special ways. but to truely know the source of such words and my undying love is a gift i'll cherish forever.

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

You flatter!! *kiss*

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, darkness_descends (15) writes:

Most definitely sums love up to the last detail. Great job I am left in awe. It flowed beautifully. ~Darkness~

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, Jonas (885) writes:

ah me (french? blah!) i know what you're saying... but what a dangerous bath to bathe in someone...

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, urbanhumility (1325) writes:

ahhh love,the things it makes you want to do. bravo very nice, i like...uh

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

In sounds like the every part of love. Taking the good with the bad. It was great how in this little poem you've just described everything you can experince in life and love. I liked it.

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