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unadulterated blankness by liquid_emotion
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unadulterated blankness

~ liquid_emotion ~

You hit a plateau and forget what to say
The pattern repeats day after day

Your insides feel trapped, wrapped up in tape
Emotions are suffocating, thoughts without shape

Frustration, I swear, you wouldn't believe
Feelings of impotence, hard to concieve

Where does it go when it doesn't come out
You can't even whisper, let alone shout

Nothing's the same and nothing is new
Seeing the world through a blinded view

Agrivation surmounting, building with time
Then a flooding release with one simple rhyme

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  • nonhero_until_death On Thursday, March 20, 2003, nonhero_until_death (158) wrote:

    I wish I had the release you got. I haven't written for a long time. Good stuff as usual liquid. :)

  • Psyanide On Thursday, February 27, 2003, Psyanide (1) wrote:

    you are worth my tears

  • liquid_emotion On Thursday, February 27, 2003, liquid_emotion (407) wrote:

    Wow. I'm truly honored...

  • liquid_emotion On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, liquid_emotion (407) wrote:

    That wet naps sounded more like a "damnit" than a "yay"...*laugh*

  • Jonas On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, Jonas (870) wrote:

    oh my fucking god! (i have a fucking god?... no wonder not much attention is paid the earth or my woes... he's obviuosly got better things... anyway)

  • Jonas On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, Jonas (870) wrote:

    you read my mind and expressed perfectly what i was going for in 'eat shit... and 'word a day...' you did much better. wet naps!

  • Jonas On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, Jonas (870) wrote:

    it's a comment continuum


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