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Double Vision

This was written through the DPmail with Rhymulous. I sarted it with the first 2 lines, he did the next 2, and so forth to my ending lines. Nothing was revised or changed... enjoy!!

Strokes of genius painted thin
Layered with emotion
Pouring out
Unleashing the anger within
Sreaked with countless
Shades of red
Painting the picture
Drawn inside his head
A collage of emotions
And ill disguised hate
Anger and rage
Which he can't contain
Flow out in furious
Strokes of insane
Then the final touch
That makes this art
All anger released
To make a fresh start

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On Saturday November 29th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

your visons of emotion exits are very abstract that was very deturing It reposed my minds skant thank you for the rant pleasant was the jovile journey

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

Nice. I don't know if I would do good co-writing a poem. I can try though. Maybe I and Naked_Faerie shall write one someday. :)

On Monday February 24th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

fun stuff! two minds yay!

On Monday February 24th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

hehe, i don't know if anyone watches aqua teen hunger force... but hehe, the foreigner belt... hehe

On Sunday February 23rd, 2003, CrestFallenSky (35) writes:

i once worked with Mindsplatter to write a poem, it was an interesting experience... keep writing(both of you) ~CFS

On Sunday February 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Thanx & It's okay emotion!!!

On Sunday February 23rd, 2003, Angelic Darkness (40) writes:

That is really nice. . think what would happen if all the great poets of the world worked together on one peice? Intersting non? I Liked it. ~*~Angi~*~

On Saturday February 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

It was fun working with you hope we can do it again...

On Saturday February 22nd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

Shit! I spelled your name wrong, sorry!! *blush* I'll change that!!!!

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