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"Nightly Shower" by liquid_emotion

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candles flickering in the darkness
reflect off a steamy mirror
and fill the air with light scents
of apple, cinnamon, and wax

warm water trails off my chin
and flows in small rivulettes
down my glistening body
carrying away shampoo bubbles
and the daily grime of stress
thoughts drift in and out
with the pulsing water
and soft beating of my heart

I reluctantly turn the knob
and squeeze the last drops
of water from my hair
pushing open the now foggy glass door
as cool, night air rushes in
to chill my dripping skin
leaving goosebumps
that a soft towel will absorb



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On Friday August 22nd, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:
I had to reread this and comment on a new thought. But coming out of a hot shower into a chilly room: PERKY NIPPLES! Sorry my mind is in the gutter.


On Friday April 25th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:
This is a relaxing poem. I think I go shower now.


On Friday April 4th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:
Nice, descriptive writing - intriguing on several levels. Ciao, T/S


On Tuesday April 1st, 2003, Marek (140) writes:
... seems to lack something to me. I dunno, just seems like an excerpt from something bigger. Maybe a short story?


On Friday March 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
I cannot remember, is this one about me? If so, my critique is: not enough about the actual release! or maybe...you just leave me wanting more? ;)


On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
here you find pulchritude painting in pastels, a golden flag that rises over the heels of the wheeling moon where even the slightest of contact with this world brings a resurrection of contingent thoughts worth remembering, as you have


On Friday February 28th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
pulchritude i don't know what it means, but it is a good word. i shall look it up.


On Saturday March 1st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
let me know, -k-, Fishy! :)


On Friday February 21st, 2003, cre (507) writes:
mmm.. very nice. good write, ty for sharing. -mb


On Friday February 21st, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
ahhh! i heave a sigh of relief! i'm stressed, but the last two poems i've read convey this tropical romance that gives me such peace! a sigh of relief again!


On Friday February 21st, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
Nice. Descriptive and provocative. Good poem. :-)



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