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Flowing

golden light that casts long
shadows over the sand
reflects off my eyes and
gives peace to my soul
I dance slowly moving my hips
with the swaying palms
and the gentle tinkling
of carribean drums

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On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

This has a very comforting a serene feel to it that leaves the mind ready to daydream. Very enjoyable:) ~Ship!

On Wednesday January 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (63) writes:

I loved this, great work.. ~cold~

On Friday October 24th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Lovely...just lovely. You have an amazing ability to jam pack emotion into 8 simple lines...this poem made me feel good. Wonderful as always!

On Thursday May 29th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:

Soothing...slow and cadent...very smooth. You have managed a perfect snap shot in words...wonderful.~DW~

On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

nicely captured ... the moment inwhich we all live to experience .. a perfect fluid running down into the state of total trancendance ... wonderful write:

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

I now know why I like this poem - couldn't put my finger on it - and will finally comment on it. This obviously is a moment you cherish. Those moments, and similar ones are the things that make one truly happy.

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

And the reason it, to me, reflects true happiness, is because these cherished moments that fill our hearts with joy at any time, whether sad or happy, can never be taken away from us. That is why life is liveable.

On Friday February 21st, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

ahhh, sweet peace floats on a warm breeze

On Saturday February 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (10) writes:

ooo how peaceful liquid =o)

On Friday February 21st, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

i too have experienced this feeling,"Nassau and St.Thomas"thanx for the imagery.u.h.ps. i like "reflects off my eyes, and gives peace to my soul"

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