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Comercialism

The world is pink and red
hearts doodled with a pen
Cupid is flying ahead
To cure the lonely men

Some say it's pain undo
For those of us alone
But I have to disagree
Although I'm cynic prone

Because the world is always pink
When sipping on good wine
And since I'm drinking alone
The entire bottle is mine!

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On Monday December 31st, 2007, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:

Multi-Dimensional! Interesting! Good Read!

On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

how sad yet humoring at the same time. i love the cynicism in it. but also...the lighthearted feeling you make of it in the end.

On Friday May 9th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:

I love this! Great rhythm! You are awesome, liquid_emotion!

On Monday May 5th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:

Very cute ~Dawn

On Friday April 25th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

HA ... the world is always pink, when sipping on good wine ... i love it ..

On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:

the entire bottle is mine.. spoken like a true lush. girl after my own heart.

On Thursday February 20th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

fuck yea! and once again for good measure holy-cow-fuck yea! that's hitting the nail on the head.

On Wednesday February 19th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

this goes straight to heart for me. hehe. My b-day is on V-day. I still have not figured out why that makes me special.

On Friday February 14th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

tou shea --- cupid . good write

On Friday June 20th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:

i didn't like it much... until the last stanza, which killed me... good save, funny poem, nice job

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