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Digital promises ringing hollow
And broken hearts
Labeled with identification numbers
Just in case they are lost in the factory
And bottles of emotion
Sent in the mail
Packaged with foam inserts
And wrapped in brown tape
Cocaine laced with fantasies
Stuck in black leather organizers
That come with lifetime garantees
Up to six months....
Lifetime garantees up to six months.
But who the hell reads fine print anyway



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On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
to be honest i think everything in the world has fine print. not wanted to be seem otherwise things wouldnt happen. emotions wouldnt be sold and nothing would be of someones own. nice.


On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
I liked that one it was the truth, who reades the fine print I sure as hell dont.


On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:
The repetition of the six months added a great effect to the work as a whole...thanks for the welcome!


On Friday February 21st, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:
Very well expressed sentiments! Six months does seem to be the magic number, doesn't it? Thanks for all of your generous comments on my work - off to read more of yours now.


On Thursday February 20th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
hehehe... this poem reminds me of internet dating.


On Wednesday February 19th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
Good old fine print. The exscuse for why nothing is as it is portrayed by the world. Understanding this life would be easy, if life were more than a dream interpretted by each and every creature in their own way.


On Saturday June 14th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:
following along, smooth read, and WHACK, the last few lines knocked me down hard. excellent delivery



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